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PostSubject: Fallout Equestria   Fri Feb 24, 2012 8:48 pm

Hi, i've finished a few chapters for my fallout fanfic now. I,m going to post my fanfic here if anyone wants to read it.

I was wondering (if you wouldn't mind) if you could look through the fanfic to improve it slightly, I'm not that god at describing situations/ developing ideas that much. If you can help me then click on the link below and make any changes you want. If you help i promise to give you credit in the footnote aswell

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PostSubject: Re: Fallout Equestria   Fri Feb 24, 2012 10:11 pm

Excellent! I love it! Don't change nothing, it's just the way it should be, awesome work! ^3^
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PostSubject: Re: Fallout Equestria   Sun Mar 25, 2012 11:24 pm

Do you know where i can find an editor for my fanfic - so they can read through it and make it better
Eg. fix spelling errors and make it flow better

Almost finished rewriting chapter 1 btw
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PostSubject: Re: Fallout Equestria   Tue Mar 27, 2012 5:35 pm

I don't know, you could always ask around the brony community on equestria daily, maybe on those forums you could post a request.



Really? You are redoing the first chapter? It's still the same in general, right?
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PostSubject: Re: Fallout Equestria   Wed Mar 28, 2012 7:16 pm

I'm just tweaking it a bit eg. changing Overhauls appeance slightly, and introducing 1 or 2 other characters during the escape.

Also adding New scenes and other things to it.

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PostSubject: Re: Fallout Equestria   Thu Apr 12, 2012 8:50 pm

I swear there is already a fallout equestria

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